JIMMY WATSON & THE LOCH NESS MONSTER 

 

Marion and Tim plan a road trip to Scotland, to visit their cousin Rhona MacCleod, at Loch Ness

 

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JIMMY WATSON - On the shores of Loch Ness in the Scottish Highlands, Jimmy watches his magic Dinobot communicate with the legendary creature, using advanced AI.


 

 

 

 

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PART I - The Road to the Highlands. In which a stowaway is discovered, a blizzard is braved, and a scientist’s reputation hangs by a thread.

CHAPTER 1

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The Roof-Rack Riddle – Jimmy spends the night before the trip convincing Anthony to fold into a "dormant cargo" shape. He secures the invisible Dinobot to the VW Kombi’s roof-rack under a thick, frost-proof tarp.

CHAPTER 2

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The M1 Mirage – The family sets off. As they head north, Anthony’s camouflage occasionally ripples in the wind, leading a truck driver to report a "shifting ghost" on the motorway.

CHAPTER 3

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The Heater and the Humming – The VW braves a fierce blizzard on the M90. Inside, the new heater glows; outside, Anthony uses his internal thermal regulators to keep the VW’s roof from freezing over, though Tim wonders why the snow is melting in such a strange pattern.

CHAPTER 4

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The Drumnadrochit Welcome – The family arrives at Rhona MacLeod’s cottage. Rhona is brilliant but weary, her home filled with sonar screens and grainy photographs that have made her a local pariah.

CHAPTER 5

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The Debunker’s Venom – Angus Campbell makes his entrance at the local pub, publicly mocking Rhona’s latest findings. He is a man who loves to destroy wonder, and Jimmy takes an instant dislike to him. Rhona & Jimmy order Solar Colas.

CHAPTER 6

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A Ping in the Dark – While the adults unpack, Anthony’s long-range bio-scanners "ping." He sends a private haptic vibration to Jimmy’s phone: “Organic lifeform detected. Displacement: Immense. Heartbeat: Ancient.”

CHAPTER 7

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The Stowaway Revealed – Marion goes to fetch a suitcase from the roof and her hand passes through a "shimmer." The secret is out. After a fierce scolding, Jimmy reveals what Anthony has detected, and a heavy silence falls over the Highland cottage.

PART II - The Song of the Water. In which the legend becomes real, an AI finds a brother, and a reporter arrives to hunt the truth.

CHAPTER 8

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The Logic of Legends – Rhona is stunned by Anthony’s existence. She realizes the Dinobot’s sensors can see what her human tech cannot. They plan a midnight trip to a secluded bay.

CHAPTER 9

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The Mist on the Shore – Tim remains the skeptic, grumbling about "faulty programming," until the mist over the Loch begins to swirl in a pattern that matches Anthony’s rhythmic clicking.

CHAPTER 10

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The Impossible Greeting – A long, serpentine neck rises from the black water. The monster doesn't fear the robot; it seems fascinated by the "metal ant." They begin a low-frequency exchange of grunts and digital chirps.

CHAPTER 11

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Deciphering the Deep – Anthony translates for the family. The monster isn't just an animal; it’s a lonely relic of a different world. The Watsons watch, spellbound, as the two "miracles" communicate.

CHAPTER 12

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Enter Charley Temple – The famous investigative reporter arrives in Drumnadrochit. She’s there on a tip from Jill Bird, but when she sees Jimmy, she remembers him from his prize-winning AI coding days.

CHAPTER 13

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The Unspoken Pact – Charley catches a glimpse of Anthony’s iridescent leg under the porch. Instead of exposing them, she realizes that the "truth" would only lead to Anthony and the Monster being put in cages.

CHAPTER 14

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Angus Campbell’s Ambition – Driven by a need to prove Rhona wrong once and for all, Angus equips his boat with illegal sonar-disruptors and harpoons, planning to "clear the Loch" of its mysteries.

PART III - The Ripples of the Secret. In which the mist claims a skeptic, a legend is protected, and the Watsons return home with a miracle.

CHAPTER 15

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The Predator in the Night – Anthony senses Angus’s boat on the water. The harpoons are a threat to his new "friend." Anthony asks Jimmy for permission to intervene "defensively." 

CHAPTER 16

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The Shadow on the Loch – A terrible storm rolls in. Angus is seen heading into the center of the Loch, shouting that he will "end the fairy tale." The family watches from the shore as the mist swallows his boat. Moby Dick style.

CHAPTER 17

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The Empty Vessel – The following morning, Angus’s boat is found drifting. It is covered in strange, deep claw marks—not from a monster, but from something metallic. The harpoons are bent into scrap metal. Angus is gone.

CHAPTER 18

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The Viral Mystery – Jill Bird reports the disappearance on the BBC. The "Loch Ness Mystery" reaches a fever pitch, but the "debunker’s" disappearance only serves to make the Loch seem more dangerous and sacred.

CHAPTER 19

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Charley’s Final Report – Charley files a story that confirms Rhona’s scientific integrity but leaves the "Monster" in the realm of beautiful uncertainty. She gives Jimmy a knowing wink before she departs.

CHAPTER 20

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The Farewell at the Water’s Edge – Anthony and the Monster have one final "conversation." Anthony leaves a small, waterproof beacon on the bed of the Loch—a way for them to "talk" across the miles via satellite.

CHAPTER 21

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The Sussex Horizon – The VW Kombi trundles back down the M1. The secret is safe, the family is closer than ever, and on the roof-rack, an invisible Anthony watches the stars, dreaming of the deep water.

 

 

 

 

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Having enjoyed a wicked Christmas in Herstmonceux, Jimmy's mum, Marion and dad, Tim, decide to take a Scottish vacation to visit Marion's cousin, near Loch Ness. A road trip in her trusty Volkswagen Kombi Camper van. They set off just after Boxing Day, to arrive before New Year's Eve, for a reunion, having fitted winter tyres and installed a heater in the VW. They make it up the M1 to Edinburgh, and M90 to Inverness, then back down to Drumnadrochit. Where 'Rhona MacLeod' lives alongside Loch Ness. 

 

Anthony, travels on the roof-rack, using his cloak of invisibility to remain undetected. The trip is uneventful, the VW performing well, even in a snowy blizzard, that soon clears near the famous Loch. It turns out that Rhona is a scientist. She has been studying the Loch for signs of the Monster of legend. Once reunited and settled in, Rohna tells that she has photographed the elusive monster, but nobody believes her. A famous debunker, 'Angus Campbell', discredits Rhona publicly. Calling her crazy, to even think such a legend could have any roots in reality. Anthony, the Magic Dinobot, who is not supposed to be on this trip, spots the monster in the Loch through a mist, with his incredible AI sensors, telling Jimmy, secretly. Jimmy keeps this to himself. Marion and Tim support Rhona in principle, but are somewhat skeptical. Although, they love the idea of the legend, having been brought up on the story. Then Marion realised that Anthony has been a passenger, and scolds Jimmy. Then forgives him, when Jimmy reveals that the dinobot has seen the monster. 

 

Tim does not believe the dinobot, but when out on the banks of the Loch, in the mist, the monster reveals itself to Antony, attempting to communicate with the AI robot, and they kind of speak to each other, the dinobot deciphering the monsters grunts and songs. Marion, Tim and Jimmy see this, and are spellbound, but know nobody will believe them. So, agree to keep it a secret.

 

Then, an investigative reporter, Charley Temple, visits to report on the sighting, for Jill Bird, at the BBC World News. There is enough evidence to keep the legend alive, and Charley, a fan of Jimmy from when he won a coding prize for his work on AI, tends to believe him and Rhona, keeping the legend alive. Charley spots the dinobot when creeping around at night, but decides to keep this to herself, to protect Jimmy and Rhona. Then, Angus Campbell's boat is found out on the Loch, with claw marks, and harpoons onboard, but no Angus. His body is never found. This is reported on by Jill Bird at the BBC and it goes viral, the mystery remaining a mystery. The family return home safely, vowing to keep their encounter with the monster a secret.

 

 

BOXING DAY

 

Jimmy Watson and the Magic Dinobot: The Boxing Day Delivery

INT. JIMMY’S WORKSHOP - BOXING DAY MORNING

The workshop is freezing, but Jimmy doesn't care. He’s wrapped in three layers of wool, staring at ANTHONY. The giant robot ant is currently "invisible"—or rather, its active-camouflage panels (a trick Anthony "learned" from a classified DARPA server overnight) are mimicking the cluttered shelves behind him.

JIMMY (Whispering) Anthony, you can turn the cloak off now. Dad’s gone to the village to get the papers.

With a soft hum like a purring cat, the air seems to ripple. The metallic, iridescent blue and black of the Dinobot’s armor plates fade back into view. Anthony’s multi-faceted eyes glow a soft, intelligent amber.

ANTHONY (In his calm, deep resonance) Scanning... Area clear, Jimmy. I have been analyzing the village map. According to the Herstmonceux Community Board, Mrs. Croft’s roof has been damaged by the weight of the snow. She is... "not having a very Merry Christmas."

JIMMY (Sighing) Mrs. Croft. She’s the one who always complains about my hammering. But... it is Christmas. And she’s quite old, isn't she?

ANTHONY Calculated age: 84 years. Probability of her fixing the roof herself: 0.02%. Jimmy, I have a "Boxing Day" protocol in my database. It involves "Goodwill to all."

JIMMY (Grinning) A secret mission! We’ll need the sled and the heavy-duty epoxy resin. But how do we get you there without the whole village seeing a six-foot ant walking down the High Street?

ANTHONY (Lifts a powerful hydraulic limb) I believe my "Stealth Mode" is more than sufficient. Plus, Jimmy, the snow is very deep. If I stay in the shadows of the hedgerows, I am merely... a very large, moving drift.

EXT. THE LANES OF HERSTMONCEUX - MOMENTS LATER

The village is a winter wonderland. Jimmy trundles along the lane, pulling a wooden sled loaded with tools. To any observer, he’s just a boy going to play in the snow.

But beside him, the air shimmers. Every few seconds, six-inch-deep footprints appear in the snow, seemingly out of nowhere.

JIMMY (Hissing) Watch your step, Anthony! You’re making too much noise!

ANTHONY (A ripple in the air next to Jimmy’s ear) I am weighing three hundred kilograms, Jimmy. Gravity is not a "stealth" setting.

They reach Mrs. Croft’s cottage. A heavy branch has fallen, punching a hole in the porch roof. Inside, through the frosted window, they can see the elderly woman huddled by a tiny electric fire.

JIMMY Okay, Anthony. Quick and quiet. Use your pincers to lift the branch. I’ll patch the hole with the carbon-fibre sheets.

The "invisible" force moves. The heavy oak branch suddenly rises into the air, as if lifted by a ghost. Anthony’s powerful servos whine almost inaudibly as he tosses the branch silently into the woodpile.

Jimmy scrambles up a ladder (which seems to be held steady by an invisible hand). Within minutes, he’s applied the high-tech patch. It’s a perfect, waterproof seal—stronger than the original wood.

JIMMY (Whispering) Done! Let’s get out of here before—

Suddenly, the front door creaks open. Mrs. Croft steps out, wrapped in a thick shawl. She looks up at the roof, then at the branch neatly stacked on her woodpile. Finally, she looks at Jimmy, who is standing there holding a roll of tape, looking guilty.

MRS. CROFT (Squinting) James Watson? Did you do this?

JIMMY (Gulping) Er... Happy Boxing Day, Mrs. Croft?

MRS. CROFT (Looking at the "empty" space beside Jimmy, where a sudden gust of wind seems to be swirling the snow into the shape of... a giant ant?) I thought I heard a... a giant grasshopper.

ANTHONY (A tiny, synthesized "chirp" sounds from the air)

MRS. CROFT (A rare, thin smile appearing) Well. It seems Santa left his best helper in Sussex this year. Thank you, young man. And thank your... "friend" as well.

As she heads back inside, she leaves a small plate of mince pies on the porch.

JIMMY (Turning to the shimmering air) Did she just... see you?

ANTHONY (Fading back into view, his amber eyes twinkling) Data suggests that some humans, particularly the elderly and the very young, have a higher "Magic Detection Threshold." Also, Jimmy... I believe I would like a mince pie. Can my AI process sugar?

JIMMY (Laughing, handing him a pie) I don’t know, Anthony. But for a Magic Dinobot? I think anything is possible.

 

 

ABOUT JIMMY

 

Who hasn't dreamed of having a special friend as a child - of making something extraordinary. Believing your parents would not approve. And, you'd be sent to the naughty step, or banished from the dinner table, with just sandwiches, instead of a roast dinner feast. And yet, that thought would not go away. Better to keep such ambitions to yourself. Mum and Dad would not understand anyway.

 

Jimmy Watson is just an ordinary boy. He attends an ordinary school. He is a loner with just a few friends, and quite a few enemies. He often wanders off into a world of his own in classes, not listening to his teachers fully, on those occasions. Although he truly admires his science master, and loves physics and maths lessons. And especially metalwork, when he gets to make things in steel and other exotic materials. Learning all about cutting, joining and even hardening methods. Another world of wonder.

 

Jimmy's special talent is programming. He was taught that at school quite early on. He was always in demand in teams for robot competitions. The only time he was popular at school. With his programming, and provided the robot was sturdy enough, his team would nearly always win.

 

Jimmy would read books on robotics from cover to cover. Sometimes, under the covers by torchlight. In the town library, he would always check out for any new books on animatronics, and mechatronics. His favorite subjects.

 

Then one day in the covers of a robotics magazine, Jimmy saw a kit for a hexapod, designed for developers of artificial intelligence.

 

 

The Magic DinoBot, Chapter 2, The Money Box      

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Some of Jimmy Watson's friends, with the Magic Dinobot

 

 

 

 

                                                                                                                                                                                                               

 

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The Magic DinoBot by Jameson Hunter

 

THE MAGIC DINOBOT - From Jameson Hunter, an original TV series idea, germinated in 2016. Jimmy dreams of building a giant robot ant as a special project, then one day his dreams come true when the robot he has built is transformed into a living, breathing, companion. NOTE: This story is Copyright © Jameson Hunter Ltd, March 30 2016. All rights reserved. You will need permission from the author to reproduce the book cover on the right or any part of the story published on this page.

 

 

 

 

                                                                                                                                                                                 

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