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JIMMY
WATSON
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On the shores of Loch
Ness in the Scottish Highlands, Jimmy watches his magic Dinobot
communicate with the legendary creature, using advanced AI.
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CHARLEY TEMPLE - LONELY HOUNDED NESSIE
INT. BBC NEWSROOM – DAY
A bustling hive of screens, ringing phones, and caffeinated urgency.
Amid the chaos stands JILL BIRD, poised and sharp, a lighthouse in a storm of sensationalism.
She speaks into her headset, voice crisp with purpose.
JILL
Charley? Long time no speak.
Cut to—
INT. CHARLEY TEMPLE’S FLAT – DAY
A cosy London apartment cluttered with notebooks, maps, and half‑finished stories.
CHARLEY TEMPLE, adventurous and bright‑eyed, leans back in her chair, twirling a pen.
CHARLEY
Jill, likewise. What’s cooking? Scandal in the capital?
JILL (V.O.)
Not the capital. The Highlands. Have you seen the blogs about the Loch Ness Monster lately?
Charley
chuckles, amused.
CHARLEY
Not recently. But who doesn’t know the legend?
JILL (V.O.)
There’s a chap—Angus
Campbell—trying to debunk the whole thing.
And he’s targeting Professor Rhona MacLeod. Impeccable credentials.
If he’s trying to discredit her, there’s a story. How are you fixed?
Charley sips a Solar
Cola, fizz crackling like tiny fireworks.
CHARLEY
Let me check the diary.
(beat)
I have a few days. When were you thinking?
JILL (V.O.)
How about now?
I’ve got a feeling about this one, Charley. It’s more than a crank with a blog.
Charley’s eyes sparkle.
CHARLEY
I’m on it.
EXT. SCOTTISH HIGHLANDS – DAY
A sweeping cinematic drive through emerald hills and heather‑purple moors.
Charley’s car winds along the road like a silver thread through a tapestry.
She hums, enchanted by the landscape.
EXT. DRUMNADROCHIT VILLAGE – DAY
Charley pulls into the quaint village, following locals’ directions toward a secluded cottage.
EXT. HIGHLAND COTTAGE – DAY
A postcard‑perfect cottage emerges from the mist.
Charley gasps softly.
CHARLEY
Oh my god…
It’s straight out of The Quiet
Man.
Her eyes land on a Volkswagen
Kombi—“MISS
OCEAN”—parked beside a rugged
Jeep.
Recognition flickers.
CHARLEY
I’ve seen those decals before…
The cottage door opens.
MARION WATSON steps out, warm and bright.
CHARLEY
Good day. By any chance, could I speak with Professor—
MARION
MacLeod.
Charley squints, gears turning.
CHARLEY
Don’t I know you…?
MARION
I’m Marion Watson.
The penny drops.
CHARLEY
Not the surfing
champion from Bude?
The one who tames the Atlantic
rollers?
She gestures at the Kombi.
CHARLEY
I knew I recognised that wagen!
A barn door creaks.
JIMMY emerges, wiping grease from his hands.
Charley’s eyes widen again.
JIMMY
Hello, Miss Temple. I’m Jimmy.
CHARLEY
Not the AI coding champion of
Sussex?
The boy who built a neural network before he could drive?
Jimmy beams proudly.
JIMMY
Yes, Miss Temple.
You came to my school
in Herstmonceux.
And later at Hailsham College.
Charley laughs, delighted.
CHARLEY
A talented family indeed.
Is the Professor at this address?
JIMMY
Come in, Miss Temple.
Take a tea with us.
I’ll go find Rhona.
INT. HIGHLAND COTTAGE – DAY
A warm, stone‑walled interior filled with books, maps, and the scent of peat fire.
RHONA MACLEOD enters—sharp‑minded, cautious, curious.
Charley rises.
CHARLEY
Professor MacLeod, I presume.
Charley Temple, BBC.
Rhona hesitates—fight or flight?
Then chooses diplomacy.
RHONA
Why the visit, Charley?
We’re a bit off the beaten track for a news crew.
Charley decides to be honest.
CHARLEY
My editor, Jill Bird, heard rumours about Angus Campbell.
He’s running a rather loud blog about—
MARION, JIMMY & RHONA
The Loch Ness Monster.
Their voices land in eerie unison.
Charley blinks.
CHARLEY
Right… that.
And you—
(to Rhona)
You’re a world‑renowned evolutionary biologist.
We wondered what your take might be.
Rhona exchanges a glance with Jimmy.
RHONA
I’m researching objectively.
I have an open mind as to… possibilities.
Charley’s internal truth‑meter pings.
Something unspoken hangs in the air.
CHARLEY
And Campbell?
He’s being quite a bully, isn’t he?
JIMMY
Downright rude, if you ask me.
Jimmy recounts the confrontation at the Kelpie’s Bridle—Hamish
MacGregor’s sour attitude, Campbell’s hostility.
CHARLEY
Oh dear.
Sounds like a brute.
Seems he wants to discredit your work entirely, Professor.
RHONA
I’m a scientist.
I’m just doing my job.
Charley looks around—sees the protective closeness of the family.
CHARLEY
For what it’s worth, the locals—and people where I’m from—
We love the legend.
Are you sisters? Cousins?
She notices Jimmy clutching his Solar
Cola.
CHARLEY
That’s my favourite drink, Jimmy.
Good choice.
Jimmy instinctively pulls the bottle closer, defensive.
The room bursts into warm laughter.
INT. BARN – CONTINUOUS
In the shadows, perfectly camouflaged,
ANTHONY watches silently.
His sensors track Charley’s thermal signature.
No chirps.
No clicks.
Just quiet, mechanical vigilance.
He records everything.
FADE OUT.
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PART
I - The Road to the Highlands. In which a stowaway is discovered, a blizzard is braved, and a scientist’s reputation hangs by a thread. |
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The Roof-Rack Riddle – Jimmy spends the night before the trip convincing Anthony to fold into a "dormant cargo" shape. He secures the invisible Dinobot to the VW Kombi’s roof-rack under a thick, frost-proof tarp. |
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The M1 Mirage – The family sets off. As they head north, Anthony’s camouflage occasionally ripples in the wind, leading a truck driver to report a "shifting ghost" on the motorway. |
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The Heater and the Humming – The VW braves a fierce blizzard on the M90. Inside, the new heater glows; outside, Anthony uses his internal thermal regulators to keep the VW’s roof from freezing over, though Tim wonders why the snow is melting in such a strange pattern. |
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The Drumnadrochit Welcome – The family arrives at Rhona MacLeod’s cottage. Rhona is brilliant but weary, her home filled with sonar screens and grainy photographs that have made her a local pariah. |
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The Debunker’s Venom – Angus Campbell makes his entrance at the local pub, publicly mocking Rhona’s latest findings. He is a man who loves to destroy wonder, and Jimmy takes an instant dislike to him.
Rhona & Jimmy order Solar Colas. |
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A Ping in the Dark – While the adults unpack, Anthony’s long-range bio-scanners "ping." He sends a private haptic vibration to Jimmy’s phone: “Organic lifeform detected. Displacement: Immense. Heartbeat: Ancient.” |
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The Stowaway Revealed – Marion goes to fetch a suitcase from the roof and her hand passes through a "shimmer." The secret is out. After a fierce scolding, Jimmy reveals what Anthony has detected, and a heavy silence falls over the Highland cottage. |
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II - The Song of the Water. In which the legend becomes real, an AI finds a brother, and a reporter arrives to hunt the truth. |
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The Logic of Legends – Rhona is stunned by Anthony’s existence. She realizes the Dinobot’s sensors can see what her human tech cannot. They plan a midnight trip to a secluded bay. |
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The Mist on the Shore – Tim remains the skeptic, grumbling about "faulty programming," until the mist over the Loch begins to swirl in a pattern that matches Anthony’s rhythmic clicking. |
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The Impossible Greeting – A long, serpentine neck rises from the black water. The monster doesn't fear the robot; it seems fascinated by the "metal ant." They begin a low-frequency exchange of grunts and digital chirps. |
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Deciphering the Deep – Anthony translates for the family. The monster isn't just an animal; it’s a lonely relic of a different world. The Watsons watch, spellbound, as the two "miracles" communicate. |
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Enter Charley Temple – The famous investigative reporter arrives in Drumnadrochit. She’s there on a tip from Jill Bird, but when she sees Jimmy, she remembers him from his prize-winning AI coding days. |
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The Unspoken Pact – Charley catches a glimpse of Anthony’s iridescent leg under the porch. Instead of exposing them, she realizes that the "truth" would only lead to Anthony and the Monster being put in cages. |
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Angus Campbell’s Ambition – Driven by a need to prove Rhona wrong once and for all, Angus equips his boat with illegal sonar-disruptors and harpoons, planning to "clear the Loch" of its mysteries. |
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III - The Ripples of the Secret. In which the mist claims a skeptic, a legend is protected, and the Watsons return home with a miracle. |
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The Predator in the Night – Anthony senses Angus’s boat on the water. The harpoons are a threat to his new "friend." Anthony asks Jimmy for permission to intervene "defensively." |
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The Shadow on the Loch – A terrible storm rolls in. Angus is seen heading into the center of the Loch, shouting that he will "end the fairy tale." The family watches from the shore as the mist swallows his boat.
Moby
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The Empty Vessel – The following morning, Angus’s boat is found drifting. It is covered in strange, deep claw marks—not from a monster, but from something metallic. The harpoons are bent into scrap metal. Angus is gone. |
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The Viral Mystery – Jill Bird reports the disappearance on the BBC. The "Loch Ness Mystery" reaches a fever pitch, but the "debunker’s" disappearance only serves to make the Loch seem more dangerous and sacred. |
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Charley’s
Final Report – Charley files a story that confirms Rhona’s
scientific integrity but leaves the "Monster" in the realm
of beautiful uncertainty. She gives Jimmy a knowing wink before she
departs. |
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The Farewell at the Water’s Edge – Anthony and the Monster have one final "conversation." Anthony leaves a small, waterproof beacon on the bed of the Loch—a way for them to "talk" across the miles via satellite. |
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The Sussex Horizon – The VW Kombi trundles back down the M1. The secret is safe, the family is closer than ever, and on the roof-rack, an invisible Anthony watches the stars, dreaming of the deep water. |
PLOT
OUTLINE:
Having
enjoyed a wicked Christmas in Herstmonceux, Jimmy's mum, Marion and dad,
Tim, decide to take a Scottish vacation to visit Marion's cousin, near Loch Ness. A road trip in her trusty
Volkswagen Kombi Camper
van. They set off just after Boxing Day, to arrive before New Year's Eve, for a reunion, having fitted winter tyres and installed a heater in the VW. They make it up the M1 to Edinburgh, and M90 to Inverness, then back down to Drumnadrochit. Where 'Rhona MacLeod' lives
alongside Loch Ness.
Anthony, travels on the roof-rack, using his cloak of invisibility to remain undetected. The trip is uneventful, the VW performing well, even in a snowy
blizzard, that soon clears near the famous Loch. It turns out that Rhona is a scientist. She has been studying the Loch for signs of the Monster of legend. Once reunited and settled in, Rohna tells that she has photographed the elusive monster, but nobody believes her. A famous debunker, 'Angus Campbell', discredits Rhona publicly. Calling her crazy, to even think such a legend could have any roots in reality.
Anthony, the Magic Dinobot, who is not supposed to be on this trip, spots the monster in the Loch through a mist, with his incredible AI sensors, telling Jimmy, secretly. Jimmy keeps this to himself. Marion and Tim support Rhona
in principle, but are somewhat skeptical. Although, they love the idea of the legend, having been brought up on the story. Then Marion realised that
Anthony has been a passenger, and scolds Jimmy. Then forgives him, when Jimmy reveals that the dinobot has seen the monster.
Tim does not believe the dinobot, but when out on the banks of the Loch, in the mist, the monster reveals itself to Antony, attempting to communicate with the
AI robot, and they kind of speak to each other, the dinobot deciphering the
monsters grunts and songs. Marion, Tim and Jimmy see this, and are spellbound, but know nobody will believe them. So, agree to keep it a secret.
Then, an investigative reporter,
Charley
Temple, visits to report on the sighting, for Jill
Bird, at the BBC World News. There is enough evidence to keep the legend alive, and Charley, a fan of Jimmy from when he won a coding prize for his work on
AI, tends to believe him and Rhona, keeping the legend alive. Charley spots the dinobot when creeping around at night, but decides to keep this to herself, to protect Jimmy and Rhona. Then, Angus Campbell's boat is found out on the Loch, with claw marks, and
harpoons onboard, but no Angus. His body is never found. This is reported on by Jill Bird at the BBC and it goes viral, the mystery remaining a mystery. The family return home safely, vowing to keep their encounter with the monster a secret.

Some
of Jimmy Watson's friends, with the Magic Dinobot

CHAPTERS
- CHARACTERS
- FILMS
- MAGIC
- PLOT
OUTLINE
JIMMY
WATSON AND THE LOCH NESS MONSTER - From Jameson Hunter, an
original TV series idea, germinated in 2016. Jimmy dreams of building a giant
robot ant as a special project, then one day his dreams come true when the robot he
has built is transformed into a living, breathing, companion. The Loch Ness
sequel stems from the original story and characters created in 2016. NOTE:
This story is Copyright © Jameson Hunter
Ltd, January 3 2026. All rights
reserved. You will need permission from the author to reproduce the book
cover on the right or any part of the story published on this page.

ANTICS
- ARMOUR
- ARTWORK
- BLACK BOX
- ELECTRONICS - ENERGY
- FRAME
- HEAD - JAWS
- KITS
- LEGS
- MECHANICS
MOTORS
- R/C
DRONE - SENTRY
- SOFTWARE
- SOUND PROOFING
- SPEED
- SUSPENSION
- TAIL
- WARGAMING
- WEAPONS
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